Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Fiction Warm Up 1


 She was looking through the freshly picked honey crisp apples when she caught my eye.  My palms grew sweaty and since I was in the banana section I was already feeling a little self conscious;)...:/ never the less, I followed her diligently, watching close and examining her every move. I could almost taste her hair on my tounge. I bet it would be a sweet honey if anything. The store was dim, and the lights didn't work very well. I felt aweful about following her around so much but I just couldn't help it. As she headed to the check out, I pulled out my worn leather wallet and took of on a sprint to the same line. As I got there I sacked up and offered to pay. Surprisingly, she was ok with it. I offered to help put her groceries in her car like a gentlemen would, and again she said yes. I could feel the adrenaline rushing through my body. I could almost relate to my moms old college heroine stories. That's besides the point; what really mattered was making making this woman mine. As she was about to get in car, she sneezed and I offered her a tissue. As she was a bout to grab it I said," excuse me can you tell me if this smells like chloroform." She was out. I felt so proud. Then we made love in her Rav 4. I was going to be a dad. This whole thing worked out so well. Im so happy she choose me.

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